Great work telling what sets your product apart from others on the market! It feels a little long winded at the start, so maybe cut down the front end to get into the product. Also maybe cut down the explanation a bit and make it more compact. But great work!
Hello Kaylee, I think your posts was really good and it does not matter in the slightest that you introduced your self at the beginning. Your ideas are very interesting and the post as a whole seems well articulated. You have a lot of emotion when you present and it made watching the video very attention grabbing which is great for an elevator pitch.
Hey Kaylee, Great work when explaining your ideas! You really sold the product with your passion about it. This being said, at the same time you never lost focus and kept a clear direction. Great work!
You keep referring to how awkward you were. I'm not sure if this was take 1 or take 100, but I didn't think you were awkward. The most awkward speakers fill up their silence with erms, ums, like's, with a trembling voice. You were able to speak thoughts with continuity and clarity, and I enjoyed hearing you speak about your box and how it will be well-worth the money since it will be more useful and customized.
Great work telling what sets your product apart from others on the market! It feels a little long winded at the start, so maybe cut down the front end to get into the product. Also maybe cut down the explanation a bit and make it more compact. But great work!
ReplyDeleteHello Kaylee,
ReplyDeleteI think your posts was really good and it does not matter in the slightest that you introduced your self at the beginning. Your ideas are very interesting and the post as a whole seems well articulated. You have a lot of emotion when you present and it made watching the video very attention grabbing which is great for an elevator pitch.
Hey Kaylee,
ReplyDeleteGreat work when explaining your ideas! You really sold the product with your passion about it. This being said, at the same time you never lost focus and kept a clear direction. Great work!
Kaylee,
ReplyDeleteYou keep referring to how awkward you were. I'm not sure if this was take 1 or take 100, but I didn't think you were awkward. The most awkward speakers fill up their silence with erms, ums, like's, with a trembling voice. You were able to speak thoughts with continuity and clarity, and I enjoyed hearing you speak about your box and how it will be well-worth the money since it will be more useful and customized.