17A – Elevator Pitch No. 2
2) What stood out to me is all the positive feedback I received last time, that made me more comfortable pitching this time around. The positive feedback also surprised me because I didn’t think my video was that great and was definitely expecting some constructive criticism. There was not any feedback that I thought was wrong, I was given some useful feedback as well as the positive. One of the comments I found useful in my feedback was that I should try to make the explanation more compact and cut it down some.
3) What I changed, based on the feedback, was my confidence while filming, I felt more comfortable so I tried to appear that way as well, even though I may still appear awkward to some. I also took the suggestion on making the explanation more compact and shorter into reflection and tried to change that in this elevator pitch.
Kaylee,
ReplyDeleteI think the Surprise Me option is pretty cool, especially paired with the personality test that directs the items that are included in the box. You clearly have experienced ordering subscription boxes that are full of garbage, and I have also experienced that. You seemed much more confident and comfortable this time around, and you accurately and concisely described the business and it's purpose.
Hello Kaylee,
ReplyDeleteI think you did a good job on this assignment. It is really cool to see your growth as the semester continues and I think you have done a good job showing your entrepreneurship skills through each assignment. You did a good job presenting here as well. I look forward to conintue to review your assingments because I am able to learn so much from your work.
Hey Kaylee!
ReplyDeleteI think that you did a really great job showing the growth between your two pitches. You had great presentation and the pitch was very concise. Overall great work and I can't wait to hear more about your product.