The feedback I received was all positive feedback. There wasn’t really anything that particularly stood out to me as important, but it was nice to hear from my peers that they support what I am doing and think that I am excelling in this class. That being said, it was a little surprising that no one had anything negative to say about my elevator pitch. There was not any feedback that I thought was wrong or silly, I thought that the positive feedback was “amazing” and inciteful because it felt authentic and genuine. The number one thing that I noticed I changed is definitely the pitch is almost memorized. I know what points I want to make and how I’m going to approach getting these points across. I am definitely more comfortable in front of the camera since I have been getting positive feedback and have done this a few times now. I think the overall pitch is better because the more comfortable you appear the more confident you are which makes your pitch better overall.
Hey Kaylee! Great work on your third pitch. I think that memorization is very important to a good elevator pitch, so I'm very glad hear that you added that aspect to this. I think that appearing comfortable in front of your audience is almost as important as what you have to say. Great work on being more confident!
Hello again Kaylee, I think you did a really good job on all the previous two elevator pitches and this one is no different. I look forward to reading and reviewing you posts each week and I think you did a really good job on this assignment. You put together some really good work throughout this semester and I hope you continue working hard on the ideas you have developed.
Hey Kaylee, Great job on the third pitch! The fact that you knew exactly what you were going to say and said it with confidence really demonstrates professionalism. Confidence is a large part of anything you do, so it's great to see that you had more of it in this pitch. Great work as usual!
Hey Kaylee!
ReplyDeleteGreat work on your third pitch. I think that memorization is very important to a good elevator pitch, so I'm very glad hear that you added that aspect to this. I think that appearing comfortable in front of your audience is almost as important as what you have to say. Great work on being more confident!
Hello again Kaylee,
ReplyDeleteI think you did a really good job on all the previous two elevator pitches and this one is no different. I look forward to reading and reviewing you posts each week and I think you did a really good job on this assignment. You put together some really good work throughout this semester and I hope you continue working hard on the ideas you have developed.
Hey Kaylee,
ReplyDeleteGreat job on the third pitch! The fact that you knew exactly what you were going to say and said it with confidence really demonstrates professionalism. Confidence is a large part of anything you do, so it's great to see that you had more of it in this pitch. Great work as usual!